Saturday, October 3, 2009

Critical Analysis- “I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD“ By William Wordsworth

“I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD“
Written at Town-end, Grasmere. The Daffodils grew and still grow on the
margin of Ullswater and probably may be seen to this day as beautiful in the
month of March, nodding their golden heads beside the dancing and foaming
waves. – William Wordsworth, 1804
I WANDERED lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees, 5
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay: 10
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be gay, 15
In such a jocund company:
I gazed - and gazed - but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:
For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood, 20
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.
- William Wordsworth, 1804
William Wordsworth’s “I Wandered as Lonely as a Cloud” opens with the
narrator describing his action of walking in a state of worldly detachment; his
wandering “As lonely as a cloud / That floats on high o'er vales and hills,” (1-2).
What he is thinking of we never really uncover, but his description leaves us to
analyze his words as a sort of “head in the clouds” daydream-like state where his
thoughts are far away, unconcerned with the immediate circumstances in which he
finds himself. Wordsworth, ever the Romanticist, perhaps uses these two
introductory lines to describe the disconnected and dispassionate ways that we all
live our lives; walking through life in a haze of daily ritual and monotonous
distractions in a pointless and spiritually disinterested state where we fail as
emotional creatures to appreciate the quiet beauties of life that we as human beings
need for spiritual sustenance. William Wordsworth’s “lonely cloud” is our own
private impersonal perception of the world, floating miles above it and missing the
quiet virtues of nature, beauty, and other sources of emotional nourishment.
As William Wordsworth’s narrator is walking, he notices “A host, of golden
daffodils;... Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.” (4 and 6). Wordsworth goes on
to describe these “golden daffodils” as a vast plot of swaying flowers around the
fringes of a bay, outdoing the beauty of the ocean’s waves with their own golden
oscillation. Describing the daffodils for the next several lines, Wordsworth helps
us to visualize what he himself has seen and was so moved by; “Tossing their
heads in sprightly dance. / The waves beside them danced; but they / Out-did the
sparkling waves in glee” (12-14). These light-hearted daffodils, weaving in unison
with each other in the wind, have romantically touched Wordsworth, their natural
beauty reaching him in ways that he describes as not fully understanding until
later: “A poet could not but be gay, / In such a jocund company: / I gazed - and
gazed - but little thought / What wealth the show to me had brought:” (15-18).
It is here that your humble writer can not help but remember one of William
Wordsworth’s earlier poems that he had written six years earlier. William
Wordsworth’s “Lines Written in Early Spring” (1798) serves the reader in much
the same way as Wordsworth’s “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud”, in that his
narrator draws inspiration from nature’s beauty to experience a deep and
meaningful emotion within himself as a philosopher and a poet. The great
difference, however, between Wordsworth’s “Lines Written in Early Spring” and
“I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud” is that in “Lines Written in Early Spring” natures
beauty induces in Wordsworth a deep and powerful mourning for how mankind
has perverted his own nature in his then modern society, whereas “Lines Written in
Early Spring” invigorates Wordsworth’s narrator with the mental imagery of the
daffodils.
Most importantly, in both poems Wordsworth describes his narrator as having a
moment of quiet introspection. In much the same way that most readers can
relate, Wordsworth’s narrator in “Lines Written in Early Spring”, upon having a
few moments to think to himself, lapses into a depressed state from his own quiet
thoughts: “While in a grove I sate reclined, / In that sweet mood when pleasant
thoughts / Bring sad thoughts to the mind.” (William Wordsworth’s “Lines Written
in Early Spring”, 1798, lines 2-4.). In Wordsworth’s “I Wandered Lonely as a
Cloud” his narrator reciprocally, upon relaxing on a couch in quiet contemplation,
is elated and pleasantly entertained by the thoughts of the daffodils dancing in his
memory: “when on my couch I lie / In vacant or in pensive mood, / They flash
upon that inward eye / Which is the bliss of solitude; / And then my heart with
pleasure fills, / And dances with the daffodils.” (19-24). Wordsworth’s narrator in
“I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud” is not grieved by “What man has made of man”
(William Wordsworth’s “Lines Written in Early Spring”, 1798, line 8.) but
contented and near-tickled by his reminiscence of the golden, light-hearted beauty
of the daffodils.
A message can be so drawn from this contrast, whether William Wordsworth
intended it or not, in a Post-Modern dissection and personal interpretation of a
theme that holds as much true to the cannon of Romanticism as to Wordsworth’s
own personal philosophy. Perhaps the popular title for Wordsworth’s “I Wandered
Lonely as a Cloud”, “Daffodils”, finds, in itself, the virtue of the poem and its
interpretive meaning. The daffodils are, as well as what Wordsworth would have
intended, natural beauty; the tranquil occurrences of lucky happenstance that we
experience and carry with us in our proverbial hearts as cherished moments and
treasured memories. Likely, many readers skimmed Wordsworth’s description of
the daffodils and quickly spurned it as a “Romantic blubber” of sorts. Needless to
say, however, Wordsworth believes, as does your humble writer, that any human
being possessing a soul and beating heart would find themselves deeply touched
by the scene of a thousand-fold host of yellow daffodils swaying in the breeze
against the backdrop of waves breaking against the rocks of a bay. This mental
image, otherwise missed by those caught up in their daily bustle and contemporary
distractions, their “wandering lonely as clouds” so to speak, is what we draw from
nature and experience when we cease our self-destructive pace. If we slow down,
just enough, we may catch by the wayside of our wanderings a spiritual creature
that could serve us as a pleasant mental image or perhaps even as a meaning or
purpose in life.
In William Wordsworth’s “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud”, the daffodils
become much more than mere flowers. They are a symbol of natural beauty and,
more importantly, symbolize living a life as rich in experience and sensation as
would make a life worth living. They represent, in their light-hearted dance, the
joy and happiness of living an adoring and fulfilling life, embracing it for every
drop of nectar it could so bring. Romanticism, a poetic philosophy that
Wordsworth himself engendered, finds much virtue in this meaning; the daffodils
reaching out and catching the eye of Wordsworth’s narrator, or perhaps
Wordsworth himself, and inspiring him so much emotionally, that he was left with
little choice than to express them poetically. Wordsworth’s narrator of “Lines
Written in Early Spring” struggles with his own innate human predisposition
towards melancholy in a world where contemporary human society and
civilization has destroyed our connection to nature, and incidentally our own
nature as well, but Wordsworth’s narrator in “Daffodils” has taken from the
moment the sweet nourishment of spiritual manna that was necessary to keep a
quiet instance of introspection from turning to depression and, instead, becoming
an exuberant reverie of a setting in memory; “They flash upon that inward eye /
Which is the bliss of solitude; / And then my heart with pleasure fills, / And dances
with the daffodils.” (21-24).
William Wordsworth’s “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud” or “Daffodils” is a
deep and moving work of poetry that under a deceivingly simple exterior could
possibly be, under energetic dissection, argued as one of Wordsworth’s greatest
works of Romanticism. By staying true to Romanticism’s philosophy of
embracing not only nature but the careful expression of the poet’s emotions
through art and how nature can so deeply affect it, Wordsworth, in four simple
stanzas if imagery, could, perhaps, not better described in verse the Romantic
ideology. The popular title for Wordsworth’s “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud”,
“Daffodils”, has in a single word summed an entire literary philosophy.

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